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Sweet dreams little girl.
Do not cry.
I want to go to bed tonight.
Please little girl,
Do not scream.
Or I shall be the enemy.

I am your soul,
I control your dreams,
Mercilessly causing your petrifying screams.
Please little girl,
Get some rest,
For when you wake up I shall put you to the test.

Fight your fears and win the duel,
Or I shall make your life so cruel.
I’m the boss you cannot win,
So please little girl trust what is with in.

I’m inside,
I am the dark.
I give no mercy to your stupid heart.
Your heart is too light in happy belief,
You’ve ignored all that’s around so I shall give you grief.

Nothing’s wrong little girl except you are forgetting me,
You are the peasant and I am your queen.
Bow to me or suffer your curse
For I shall make it even worse.

You know you’ve sinned,
You know what you’ve done.
So I’ll never let you seen the sun…
Again.

Never again will you go against me,
Never again will you try to stop me.
Never again will you do what you did,
For I make the rules, and they have been broken.

You thought you were so pure,
But you forgot about me.
I am your inversion,
I have always been free.
Yet now you are chained in your own disbelief.

Believe me little girl, what you have done is wrong.
You always thought you were so strong.
You refused to use your eyes for what they could see,
You didn’t want to look at what is Me.

I am you,
And you are me.
Bound together in agony.
Don’t regret this little girl,
For you are the shame of the entire world.
Stop bragging about your dreaded life and what you have yet to be.
Embrace the present and the past and cherish what is Me.
Except yourself for who you are and you’ll finally be free.
©2004-2009 =blueluck72
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I really like this one :D

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:iconjoluh:
Wow awesome.
I really like this one, you know, as first thought, I got what the poem ment.

Then my mind always finds more views, then I got the idea of a lesbian couple, then more ideas.

This is a poem that didn't hitted my heart, but in a way, I kinda understood it, auto faved.

Keep the good work Marni =3

--
I know the human heart...
And how to read the stars...
:iconblueluck72:
LoL, the poem really makes me wonder what the girl did. I guess what she did was forgetting who she was, and to be proud of herself. I guess she lost all hope in herself and her confidence :( :( But yeah, there are so many more things the girl could have done...

Aw thankyou :) :) This poem kinda freaked me out, but it was really fun to write :D :D Thanks for all your encouragement :D

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- Donkey Dudette, the donkey that moos...

>=)"Dude, I'm a donkey, not a rabbit." >=)

:heart:*then runs away when she sees a giant floating piece of cheesecake*:heart:

Proud admin of ~Monolith-Verses
:iconfiremage:
*bows* Yes, my queen. XD

Very nice, I heart it, it is very good. Nice job!

--
Love heals when you feel so small
Like a grain of sand
Like nothing at all
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I love ye ~johnnydepp


~FireMage :jester:
:iconblueluck72:
Hehehe >=) Thankyou :)

--
- Donkey Dudette, the donkey that moos...

>=)"Dude, I'm a donkey, not a rabbit." >=)

:heart:*then runs away when she sees a giant floating piece of cheesecake*:heart:

Proud admin of ~Monolith-Verses
:iconjoluh:
Indeed, it is good.

--
I know the human heart...
And how to read the stars...

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